DaveFason Posted August 30, 2014 Share Posted August 30, 2014 New website will be up this Friday. I will be doing a few ads with multiple websites and wanted feedback. I will have one for the Duo and QUAD as well. I need to fix a couple small items on the Tide. https://flic.kr/p/oYfNEL'>https://flic.kr/p/oYfNEL'>newadtide1 copy by https://www.flickr.com/people/79064526@N08/'>Dave Fason, on Flickr https://flic.kr/p/oYQMnh'>https://flic.kr/p/oYQMnh'>adphoto1 copy by https://www.flickr.com/people/79064526@N08/'>Dave Fason, on Flickr I am going for simple but catch your eye things. Of course the website will be added on the bottom Thoughts? Link to comment
jolee0722 Posted August 30, 2014 Share Posted August 30, 2014 Great! I think you should also have a picture of a thriving tank with your light over it. The picture should show the light and the tank in one. Link to comment
Mariaface Posted August 30, 2014 Share Posted August 30, 2014 It might be better if the coral photos had a pixel or two of space between them; having them flush against each other feels a bit odd. Can't wait to see them live! Link to comment
skyscraper2290 Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 Agree with the coral pics being slightly separated and maybe use a coral picture that shows more of transition from the green to orange. Looks awesome though, and maybe some type if photo credit to ninja somewhere on the site because those pictures are great Link to comment
D Z Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 I personally like the second picture. There is nothing else on the market that resembles a Nanobox, use that to your advantage! Link to comment
ninjamyst Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 those coral pics are pretty nice =P Link to comment
Nickbruh510 Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 Love it man, but honestly if icould change one thing it would be change the coral pic in the middle of the top photo into a bad@$$ SPS instead of some cloves man, kmon I know and have seen nanobox hold the color and grow some mean sps:) IMHO a beautifull strawberry shortcake acro, or some sick orange Millie some sps with a different color than you have there too much green! Hope this help but ya know I'm right Link to comment
Legendary Corals Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 Love it man, but honestly if icould change one thing it would be change the coral pic in the middle of the top photo into a bad@$$ SPS instead of some cloves man, kmon I know and have seen nanobox hold the color and grow some mean sps:) IMHO a beautifull strawberry shortcake acro, or some sick orange Millie some sps with a different color than you have there too much green! Hope this help but ya know I'm right +1 on if you can get an SPS. A lot of people will buy a proper light fixture if they see that it's capable of growing SPS. Link to comment
metrokat Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 BAM! WHAM POW! Aww Yeah! Now THAT! Is a Nanobox coral. Link to comment
spazizz Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 You have a hybrid fixture though, right? BAM! WHAM POW! Aww Yeah! Now THAT! Is a Nanobox coral. Link to comment
Fnard Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 It might be better if the coral photos had a pixel or two of space between them; having them flush against each other feels a bit odd. Can't wait to see them live! Agree 100% on this. Either do as suggested or you could feather them into each other. But if you do go that route, I'd swap the goni and zoa position. Too much green. Another way to do it would be to tilt each pict in random directions. Last thing, I'd use a nice color unit. The black looks way drab, especially against the corals popping with color. Let the unit standout and grab the attention. jm2¢ Link to comment
Kalanianaole Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 +1 to showing SPS, that capability is why I bought the tank I like that it's simple and you probably don't want to clutter it, but a reference to "full-spectrum" and "LED" helps inform the viewer exactly what they're looking at. So for the copy, you could get away with "Custom Built, Full-Spectrum LEDs. +1 to showing a killer nano tank vs. just showing corals. Give the viewer something to aspire to with your lights. Plus, you serve a niche market better than anyone else right now so promote that! Link to comment
metrokat Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 You have a hybrid fixture though, right? I do. Link to comment
TeamIM24 Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 The ads look nice but they don't tell people that the Nanobox is a LED for nano tanks. We are familiar with it from the forum but I doubt you want to run ads to get our attention. If you are trying to reach people that aren't familiar with you I would consider something (as others have suggested) that features your product over a tank and more descriptive text. Link to comment
DaveFason Posted September 1, 2014 Author Share Posted September 1, 2014 Thanks for all the help guys. I will be going in a swapping some stuff out today. This is why I love Nano-Reef. -Dave Link to comment
DaveFason Posted September 2, 2014 Author Share Posted September 2, 2014 Revised. Spacing, new photos and "better" unit colors. I am using these for a basic link on the new website. On the others I will have a quick blurb on full spectrum, etc. Thoughts? duoad by Dave Fason, on Flickr minitidead3 by Dave Fason, on Flickr minitidead3 by Dave Fason, on Flickr Thanks again guys. And a huge shout out to Ninja. Awesome,killer,amazing photos. -Dave Link to comment
hey Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 The add featuring the tide seems a lot stronger than the duo specifically because of the width of the fixture in relation to the coral pics. I understand the size difference but felt like it should be pointed out that it is definitely stronger than the duos poster. Link to comment
MountainReef Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 That's a nice DUO. Link to comment
ninjamyst Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 I like the Tide one more too =). I think both should be consistent as far as the spacing between photos, size of the photos, and even font size used on the bottom. Sorry for being nitpicky, but I am a web software designer and just went through UI review on like 200 webpages =P. Link to comment
DaveFason Posted September 2, 2014 Author Share Posted September 2, 2014 I like the Tide one more too =). I think both should be consistent as far as the spacing between photos, size of the photos, and even font size used on the bottom. Sorry for being nitpicky, but I am a web software designer and just went through UI review on like 200 webpages =P. Got it! This is all being done by myself. So it is a learning lesson itself. I feel that they are turning out half way decent -Dave Link to comment
TeamIM24 Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 Big improvement. Keep up the great work! Link to comment
Alex B Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 I like the tide one! I got some better pics also if u need em. Link to comment
Horerczy Posted September 3, 2014 Share Posted September 3, 2014 You gots to show the business end of those beasts. Not enough shots of that imo. Link to comment
Nickbruh510 Posted September 3, 2014 Share Posted September 3, 2014 Yes great start!! More sps!! Also something saying LEDs! Link to comment
DaveFason Posted September 9, 2014 Author Share Posted September 9, 2014 I guess one thing to remember is SPS is really for hardcore people. Your average "reefer" is not in it just for SPS. RETRO https://flic.kr/p/p6Mw8h'>https://flic.kr/p/p6Mw8h'>newtrowebsite2014 by https://www.flickr.com/people/79064526@N08/'>Dave Fason, on Flickr -Dave Link to comment
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